This whole week, I planned in my head how this will work... so if there’s typos I apologize.
They stood outside waiting for the captain to come, then they saw a black buck coming toward them. Zanes heart beat faster as the buck approached. “How are you tonight?” He addressed “we’re good.” Blake said “I am captain helmer,” he said with a hand out to shake, Zane shook it. “I’ve been sent to take you to the king for dinner tonight.” Then gesturing to follow him, he led them to the palace. Zane, who was uncomfortable with the silence, asked helmer “so you have family?” He nodded “a sister, and this is misty?” “Yes” Zane replied. On coming to the palace Zane felt his heart pound like a drum inside his chest, opening the door, helmer gestured to let him go first. The hall was long and beautiful with painting outlining the walls. They then entered a dining room and there, in the middle of the room, at the table, was king Jupiter. His smile made the whole room light up as he motioned them to come to him, he couldn’t believe this was happening. As Zane approached the king, he gave a low bow. “There’s no need for that, young Zane.” Jupiter said as he let him come back up, welcoming the others in, they all took their seats at the table, Zanes next to the kings and a cradle beside it. The first thing they did was having dinner, then afterwards, Jupiter asked “so how did you find misty?” Nodding his head to misty’s cradle where she slept. So Zane told him how he found her, but Zane felt that he shouldn’t tell him about how his father responded to it. “You could’ve taken her to the orphanage, yet you took her in as your own.” The king marvelled. Then the time came for them to go home. Before they entered Blake said to Zane “can we talk?” “Sure,” Zane answered, unsure what he wanted to talk about. Going into the living room, Zane looked at his father, he saw tears in his eyes, “I am so sorry. Can you ever forgive me?” “Of course,” Zane said crying himself, as he embraced his father. They discovered the crying on the beach.
This will probably be the last chapter, I don’t know, I might do another chapter, but till then,
Bear the flame,
J.J.B.
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Crying on the beach: chapter 5
Crying on the beach: chapter 5
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This was so well written! And I love how Zanes father apologized at the end! Amazing job!