Here’s the next chapter!!!!! Enjoy 😉 Zane approached his familiar home with a sweet smell of carrots, potatoes, and cabbage. Then he thought ‘how will I tell father and mother?’ As he thought his heart started pounding in his chest, taking a deep breath, he opened the door. “Hey honey, welcome ho-” Martha said then paused as she saw misty asleep in Zanes arms. His father Blake noticed the pause in Martha’s voice, then he looked over his papers and saw Zane with a doe. A long period of silence fallowed after, then, Blake spoke “Zane, why do you have a kit in your arms?” With a hint of anger in his voice “she was laying on the beach while I was on my way home, alone.” Zane answered with confidence, he saw the fire burn in his fathers eyes. “You can’t just take a kit home!” Blake roared “Then what do you suggest I do? Leave her on the streets!?!?” Zane protested “and what if her parents are looking for her?” Blake inquired. “What if her parents died, or don’t care about her?” Zane rebuked, Blake sobered then said “My son wouldn’t do something so absurd.” “Probably not,” Zane said “but Jupiter would have done it.” Then, taking misty, he went into the kitchen to Martha and said “I don’t think father would enjoy me under his roof, I’ll stay in the shed.” Martha gave him a look of disbelief, then seeing the seriousness in his eyes, she said “you’ll need some blankets.” Then, a few minutes later, she came back with some blankets, and before he left, she embraced her son and, with tears in her eyes, she said “I am so proud of you.”
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Aww, what a great chapter!!! Wonder what's happening next!!!! We loved it!!!!!!! He Dad needs to let him keep Misty!!!!!!!!!
Aww, that's so sad and sweet! Good job! (Also, that sounds so wonderful - that his home smells like carrots, potatoes, and cabbage! Yum!)