I wrote this in a rush for a school assignment today. Not very good, but it's supposed to be a song....
Picket:
Our uncle betrayed our father
Because he still loved our mother
He seeks to destroy our home
He wants to strip us down to bone
We can attack him
For the cause,
I would give up all my limbs
We may lose
We may win
Just know I won't hesitate to kill him
Just because he is my kin
Heather:
We will clear our name
This isn't one big game
We can destroy his lord
We will learn how to use a sword
This isn't one big game
Both:
We will clear our name
WE WILL CLEAR OUR NAME!
Sween:
The name
of Longtreader
Whittle:
This isn't a game
Wilfred:
We will clear our name!
All:
The name
of Longtreader
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I just got a chance to read this. IT IS AMAZING!!! I especially love Picket's part!!! Thank you so much!
That's cool!!!!!!! The lines work really nice!!! Great job!!!!
That’s great! It takes me like HOURS to write poetry, and even then it stinks! This is good! Nice, Mr Blackstar!
Hey, I like this!! It reminds me of "Picket Packslayer", only more serious than that.
Awwww!!!! I love this! It’s so well written and it would be so amazing if someone sung it! (not me lol)
but seriously, great job!!!! I love Heathers part especially!!!!
Rereading this makes me cringe. #imadeabigoof