So, I don't really know what to call this fanfic, so if you guys have any ideas, I'd love to hear them!!
Also would love to hear any feedback! (Especially since I'm getting ready to edit my book for publishing 😬😱)
Blessings,
A. R.
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Laurel watched in horror as the birds of Prey and bucks of the administration crashed down upon the rabbits of Akolan. Remembering she stood in the middle of the chaos, she turned to run… and ran straight into a captain of the administration. He snarled at her as he drew a sword. “A part of this resistance, are we?” He raised his arm and prepared to bring the sword down on her and end her pitiful life. She could see the sun glint off the blade, but it appeared so slowly. The captains face was twisted in a sick grin, but he moved like a snail.
This is the end.
Laurel inhaled deeply and clenched her fist. She would be ready. This was for everyone; everyone would be able to get to the seventh district and escape to freedom. Everyone would be able to help the Cause. And her? She would give her all for the Cause. She had given her heart. And now, she was giving her life.
Laurel looked up at the sword as it began to descend upon her. At least her parents wouldn’t see this horrid sight, the death of their child. At least Patrick was smuggled away to the seventh district. And Dylan?
Tears sprang to her eyes as she realized the horrible reality. Would Dylan choose the right side? Had he already? Or would he remain a traitor to both the Cause and her heart?
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Oh boy this is gonna be good, I can just tell!! A very well written prologue- if it were in book form I'd be turning the page lickedy-split! Very intriguing with just enough information to tell us what it's about,,, 👌 I'mma go read the next parts, not sure how far I'll get today though since I'm making dinner tonight 👀
Good job! I like the short prologue, and I am looking forward to seeing Dylan.
Amazing! Idk how I missed this chapter 😅 but it seems to have dragged me further into the story!
Awesome!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Amazing!!!!!!!! That is all that needs to be said, this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So interesting and awesome and we're gonna go read chapter one cause we don't want to wait....lol....it was that good!!!!!!!!!!!
What a gripping beginning! I am literally so excited to see the next chapters!!!
And that is so awesome! You're writing a book? YES! I hope the upcoming publishing will go amazingly well.
Oh. My. Goodness. No. No you can’t stop there!!! You wrote a book?!?! What’s it called?!?! Oh that’s so cool!!!
This. This is gold right here. I am so hyped for this! Who's Patrick? and Dylan?