"That's nice," Amber said, looking at the dark grey buck, "Are you named for Helmer the Black?"
"I think so. I can't ask my parents," he replied.
Helmer turned to the golden with them, named Cassie. He mouthed, 'How do I tell them I'm an orphan?', but she didn't seem to notice. She was too busy looking at Joel. Helmer glanced at him too. Joel had a red line of fur over his left eye. It seemed out of place on his usually black fur. It almost looked like a scar.
'A scar,' Helmer thought, 'It's a scar. But how did he get it.'
"Hello? Helmer?" Cassie said.
"What?" He asked.
"Mrs. Shanks asked why you can't ask your parents."
"Oh, they-they died. When I was pretty young. I don't remember much of them," Helmer told them this, not making eye contact with anyone.
"I'm so sorry, Helmer. I didn't know," Amber said. Jo's ears perked up, and he immediately ran upstairs. He came back with a full quiver on his shoulder and a bow in his hand.
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This could work....but still Helmer and Isle....But your doing great keeping us guessing....
Wait... Cassie and Helmer? They could go together... this is a great chapter!
Oh. Well, if that is the way it works... DON'T KILL HELMER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!!
I’m absolutely loving my character! She seems so... me! Thanks so much!!!
I wonder how Joel got the scar...
and did you know my hair was goldenbrownish or did you guess? Can’t wait for next chapter!