Here's chapter two, hope you guys like it!
She jerked open the door to the house. Where are you mother, she thought anxiously. She then heard another scream, but this time the scream didn’t come from her mother it was Weezie. “What is it Weezie?” She called, but Weezie didn’t answer she was looking out of the window with a look of horror on her face. Layra looked out the window and put a hand over her mouth. The rabbit she had seen early, with the sword pointed at her father’s throat, was now punching her father over and over again. She watched as her father slumped to the ground. She lowered her hand from her mouth, but someone else roughly put their hand over her mouth. She struggled to get loose of the rabbit and bit the hand as hard as she could.
“Ouch!” the rabbit said as he let go of her. She spun around and kicked the rabbit in the stomach. The buck fell to his knees and she looked around for Weezie. But Weezie was not there.
Layra then heard a familiar voice from behind her, she turned around and saw Weezie, mother, and another rabbit. She looked into the rabbit’s dark brown eyes as she said, “What do you want with us?”
“I don’t want anything from you,” the rabbit said, then he added, “I’m just following orders.
“Following orders from who?” Layra pressed, angry. The buck didn’t answer, and she said, “I asked you a question now are you going to answer me?”
“You don’t know when to be quiet do you,” the rabbit said, as he walked towards her and grabbed her arm. “Bring them outside.”
When's Chapter 3 coming out! This is really good! You're great at writing cliffhangers.