Okay we just hit 150 fanfic post, this being the 150th....that is pretty awesome and here's the chapter....WARNING THIS IS A TEAR JERKER....YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
They sat in a dark dungeon. Duncan felt bad about what he had done. He looked over at Layra, she had her head in her lap and her hands over her head, she was crying. He walked over to her and sat beside her. “I am so sorry. I didnae
mean to I just did it for me wee brother.”
He watched as she looked up at him, with tears running down her face. She then hugged him and said, “It’s not your fault and I don’t want you to feel bad about it, you were trying to take care of your brother. I would have done the same thing.”
Duncan didnae ken what to do, so he hugged Layra. She was still crying and now she cried on his shoulder. What is Daggler going to do with her? And where was his brother? He then heard someone open the cell door. He looked up to see who it was, it was Daggler and two of the black band. Daggler walked into the cell laughing, Layra stiffened and turned.
“What do ye want with us?” Duncan asked.
Daggler smiled, he then grabbed Layra’s arm and jerked her away from Duncan. “Duncan!” Layra screamed reaching for him.
“Let go of her, she is just a lass*,” Duncan said, as he got up. The two other rabbits grabbed him and held him back.
“It will be alright, Duncan, I’m not afraid of him. He is just a rabbit, just like us.” Layra said, her voice thick.
“Donnae please!” Duncan said, pleading with Layra not to say more, for he could see in her eyes that she would.
“If you are going to kill me then get it over with, but it won’t change anything. It won’t make you feel any better, it won’t change the past,” Layra said, boldly looking at Daggler.
Duncan watched as Daggler said in anger, “You are just like him!”
“Just like who? My father or my uncle?” Layra asked, in bewilderment. Duncan saw Daggler draw his sword and he turned his head. He couldn’t watch Layra die, he liked her. He closed his eyes as tears came to them. The last thing he heard from Layra was a scream, then the two rabbits let go of him and he fell to the ground. He heard the cell door close and turned his head. He saw her laying on the ground. He got up and ran to her, falling to his knees by her side. He picked her up and laid her gently in her lap. He saw where the sword had gone in, he held her tightly in his arms weeping softly. Layra was dead.
*girl (Okay you all probably knew that one...)
BY: M. G. P.
This can be the end or I can try to write something happier to end it on, let me know what you guys want...
Wow, that was good. As it would be relevant to end it, considering chronologically, that would have been what happened. But, you could either continue it poised on Duncan and his last word/thoughts or you could also start another fan-fic about his brother and his backstories being captured and all. Think you did a really good job on this fan-fic. And hey, I learned some Scott.
😭 Oh, poor dear Layra!!! She's so brave... I suggest doing one more chapter in Layra's remembrance, etc. That would be really satisfying!
Ahhhh!!! 😭😭😭 poor Duncan!!! (It is a tear jerker... crap! Lol)