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Jaidie/Dragon girl
“This way,” Hanna said as she sheathed her sword and walked towards a long spiral staircase. Her cousins followed.
Jo peered over the railing and gulped.
“What’s wrong Jo?” Maylie asked.
Jo looked away. “Nothing, let’s go.”
They walked at a fast pace, Hanna leading the way. Hanna knew they were getting close, they were almost there.
“I think we’re almost there,” Hanna said as she reached the top of the stairs.
“Wait!” Jo yelled.
Hanna spun around.
“Not again Jo, we’ve been through this! If want to leave then just leave!” Hanna snapped.
“No! Hanna, I’m serious, where’s Niles?” Jo said panic in his voice.
Hanna looked frantically around, but Jo was right Niles was…gone.
Hanna kicked herself. How could she have been so foolish? Why had she taken her eyes off him?
“How could I have been so dumb!” Hanna said, pulling on her ears.
“Jo, wait!” Maylie screamed.
Hanna looked up to see Jo sprinting off, but she also saw someone else. Saige BlackStar.
Hanna grabbed Maylie's hand and ran towards the room she was sure the buck she was looking for was in.
“We can’t leave them!” Maylie yelled.
“We don’t have a choice! Don’t worry, Jo will find Niles,” Hanna said as she opened the door and ran into the room.
***
Niles had been walking with Hanna and the others, when he had heard something. Something like crying. He had taken a slight detour to see what it was and now he wished he had never known.
Niles gulped as he knelt down beside the limp form of the rabbit, just to see if he was still alive or not. Then he heard a hissing sound. He froze.
“What do we have here?” a raspy voice said from behind him.
Niles slowly looked up, then gasped and scrambled away.
“You’re supposed to be dead,” Niles choked out.
The large dragon laughed. “Who told you that?” it asked as it came closer.
“My father,” Niles answered.
“Oh, really? And who might that be?” the dragon asked.
Niles stared into the dragon’s dark eyes.
“Kylen Joveson prince of Tarralain,” He said, though he didn’t know why had answered this beast.
The dragon stared at him. “Do you misssss your father young one?”
Niles didn’t know why, but he felt like he had to answer.
“Yes, I do, I really do,” he said, holding back his tears.
The dragon smiled. “Good, becausssse you’re about to join him!” the dragon yelled as she pounced at him.
Niles tried to escape, but the dragon was too fast.
Niles yelped as the dragon laid her claw over his small head.
“Time to die,” she said.
Niles kicked at the dragon as he screamed out. “Hanna help!!!”
What! So this isn’t after embers end!? Or is it?!?!
AWww that's so sad!!!!!!!!! Niles!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭💔 Urgh that gif at the end was perfect, lol... amazing writing and I can NOT wait for the next chapter!!!!
What the crap just happened? I am bumfuzzled....crazy plotwist! Wow! That was unexpected....can't wait to see what happenes next! Great job!
KYLEN?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?! AAAAAAHHHHHHHH I THINK I JUST HAD A HEART ATTACK!!!!!! I was excpecting Whit or something... oh, I was so positive..... wait, Kylen is Joveson? Also, shouldn't Hanna technically be Smallson or something? Just something I've been considering. What, you killed Kyle? Please tell me Kyle's dead!!!!!! Also, I even remembered that yesterday was monday, I really did this week! but I wasn't able to get on.... =(
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY lol
the first scene reminded me a little of LOTR when they first go into Moria...
JAIDIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON"T HURT NILES! NO KYLEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DONT KILL HIM EITHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
I Will kill Fleck if Niles gets hurt, if anyone does mwahahahaha lol
What in the world just happened? what did you do with my baby?! what is going on?! Why are you so so so cruel to your characters?! Oh no, I like Niles! Why Jai Jai? Why why so much suspense and you know that we all are going to have to wait for more intil next week! Oh, I see how it is you are doing this on perpose! well, well, well little sister dont I haf a secret for you in my next chapter it will be for worst then what you are doing to Nilles! I will make sure of that! Mawhahahha.... you better not hurt Nilles or anyone else in less you want me to do something bad I would be fine with what ever you choose lit sis😉