I didn't realize I had posted 5 chapters. 😂 I am sorry I haven't posted consistently. I have been super busy. 😕 That is the same reason this chapter is so short. Anyways, I will get on with the chapter, and if you have any tips, I'd love to hear them. Thank you!
-Mercy
Rissa:
I worked as an assistant for Lord Rake, and later, I left Cloud Mountain to work for Lord Ramnor. I hated to leave my sister behind, but she was grown now, and I knew I had to give my all in the upcoming war.
Yes. War. It was coming quickly to us, and I wanted to be prepared. Rabbitkind would give their all, and many of us would give their lives. I was ready to be one of those. For my sister to live in a world of peace. For my father, to make him proud of how he had taught me. For my dear mother, who had never loved war, but would have done whatever was needed to protect those she loved.
I thought I was prepared.
I slid a report onto the top of a growing pile, glancing out the open door with a frown when a strange scraping noise came from the hall. Ignoring it, I continued sorting the papers from the previous night's council. I hadn't heard much about it, but I knew the prince had left for Kingston to arrange a meeting with the other citadel lords. I wished Prince Smalls well, for Lord Ramnor seemed determined to make everything a difficulty.
A scream from outside the door interrupted my thoughts.
My head jerked up as a shadow fell over the table. The last thing I saw were slavering teeth and sooty fur, before a painful strike sent me into oblivion.
This was so good! Good to have you on! Ohh, the suspense.... Amazing cliffhanger....oh man, this was so good!!!!! Like Awesome!!!!!!!!
Aaaahh!! I'm in so much suspense!!! Your writing is amazing and this was so enjoyable to read; I actually liked the length though of course I want more right now. XD (Don't feel any pressure though! Because you don't post often, I appreciate the chapters even more when they do come, so there's an advantage!) I love Rissa and really like how this is in the first person. Great job!!!!!
Ahhhhhh!!! Rissa please be okay!!! You're sister needs you!! Amazing job!!!!
UGGGHHH
I JUST FINISHED READING A PART IN MY BOOK WHERE MY FAVORITE CHARACTER DIED AND NOW I HAVE TO READ THIS AND I DONT WANT HER TO DIE AND
*angry huff*
Also, I miss you when your not on! Thanks for being awesome!
oh no!!!!!!! amazing writing. i hope it will be alright in the end!!!!!!