Hey-Oh guys! Here’s my new fanfic! Eeeeee, I’m so happy to share it with you guys! Eeeeee, hope y’all like it! Feedback wanted! Oh, and sorry about the horrendous grammar…lol….Enjoy!
Hanna Joveson peered out over the vast barren terrain of Kingston Citadel. All was quiet the only sound that of her cousins shallow breaths and racing hearts. Hanna turned to face her three cousins, the only rabbits she could trust in this broken world. They all looked tired and weak, but they nodded their heads at her, a sign that they weren’t giving up just yet. Hanna smiled a weak, fake smile.
“Are you all ready for this?” She asked looking at them, with all the kindness she could muster from her hopeless heart.
“I am,” Niles Joveson said, stepping forward. Though Niles was the youngest of them he was also one of the bravest. Niles stood tall before her, even though at his full height his ears only made it to Hanna's neck. Niles smiled a almost hopeful smile.
“Me too,” Maylie Shanks said, stepping beside Niles.
Hanna nodded, then looked over at the one rabbit left.
“What about you Jo?”
Jo Longtreater looked at her, biting his lip and shifting his feet.
“Jo?” Niles said, cocking his head at his cousin.
Jo took a deep breath.
“I don’t agree with your plan, Hanna, but I…I want nothing more than to see my family again, so I’m in, but not for you for them,” Jo said, as he pushed passed them.
“He still blames me,” Hanna whispered.
“No, he doesn’t he is just hurting,” Maylie said, gently laying a hand on Hanna's shoulder.
“We all are!” Hanna yelled, pulling away from Maylie.
“Hanna?” Niles whispered, worry filling his deep green eyes, eyes that were to young to show such worry.
Hanna took deep breaths to calm herself.
“Their moving,” She said ignoring Niles. “We need to move, Jo, Niles, are you two ready?”
“I am,” Niles said softly.
“Okay…Wait, where’s Jo?” Hanna said, frantically looking around for her grey furred cousin.
“I don’t…” Maylie began, but just then a high pitched scream split through the air.
“Jo!” Niles screamed.
Hanna whirled around, but then froze.
“No, one moves unless you want your friend to die,” Fane BlackStar hissed, as he pressed his sword against Jo's neck.
“I’m sorry,” Jo gasped out, as blood trickled down his neck.
But there was no need for an apology it was to late they had been caught by one of the most merciless rabbits in all of Natalia. They were done for.
Tah-dah are you confused? Mawhahahhahah……read more of the fanfic to find out what’s going on! Heheheheehehe……
Whaaaaaaaaatttttttt!?!?!? *confusion welling over me while exited for the next chapter
JAIDIE WHAT HAVE YOU DONE NOW?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
lol but i am going to cry. i was literally feeling like i was there until my mom said to go order oranges for my cousins lol! i... owwwwwwwwwww Jaidie! I LOVE THEM!!! and ahhh! Jo my child! lol! please, please, Jaidie, can i sneak into Natalia and destroy Fane so he can't harm another living creature?
AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO PICK AND COMPANY??????
also, sorry i didnt get the notif. yagh!!!!!!!!!!! lol.
but yes, this was the best chapter youve written so far i just dont know how to express this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this should do: 🤣🤣😊😥😪😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😫😫😫😫😫😫😫😫🤨🤨🤨😣😶🤔😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😨😨😨😨😨😨😤😤😤😤😩😩😩😩🤯🤯🤯🤯😱😱😱😱😳😳😳😧😧😧😢😢😢💚💚💚💚💚💚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💙💙💙💙💙💙💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💛💛💛💛🧡🧡🧡🧡💜💜💜🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍❤❤❤❤🖤🖤🖤💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🐰🐰🐰🐰💥💥💥💥💥🐇🐇🐇🤯🤯🤯😱😱😱😤😤😤😤🤔🤔🤔🍓😥😥😥😥😥💛💛💛[also yes, that was a strawberry. Jo needs one lol]
Oh no and oh wow!!!!! I'm confused and intrigued, meaning I'm SO looking forward to more of "A New Legacy"!!! (Also, my youngest brother's name is Niles and I'm so happy... I already love Niles in this fanfic!! He sounds so thoughtful and brave. 💚)
Omg!!!!!!!!!! I feel so bad for the people who don't live with you literally have no idea what's going on because the suspense created in that chapter would kill me if you hadn't told me your idea!!!!! Wow!!!!!!!! That was incredible!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it soooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing chapter that makes really want chapter 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
OMGoodness! wow! wow! this was the best, I mean the best fanfic chapter that you have ever written, ever! it was so so so fantastic and I love all of the characters all of them except for Fane of course, he just evil! But wow! Wow! I am a little in shock by your writing! this was so so so.... I dont have the words for it! Anyway you did a cliff hanger! Awwww, I am so proud of you! 😉you did such a great job! it was the best of the best and I can't wait till chapter 2! I love this so so so much! Jai-Jai great job sis!💙💜💙💜💙💜💙💜