I stand here.
Looking at this chaos.
And inside of me.
The heart of a warrior beats.
How can I watch the fear.
With the blood of love
running through my veins
There's a rising.
To protect the oppressed.
I can't silence it.
even to protect my own freedom.
But I have a feeling.
If I can't speak
I must hide my emotions.
Am I really free?
I can free my heart.
But outside be bound.
Or physically be loosed.
But inside be wreathed in chains.
Maybe I should just forget it.
someone else will stand.
But am not I
someone else to someone
If they are all like me
No one will arise
Aaaahrrrr.
but the heart of a warrior beats!
This is so good!
ok.. i'm rereading this.. oh my... sounds so good, i love the emotion...
Wow!!!! This is really good! Like so good, the emotion behind the poetry was amazing! You are going to be like a modern day Shakespeare or something, this was literally so good!!!!!
it's so good!! i love how you captured whit's feelings!
Oh wow this was so good!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job!!! I totally agree with Mercy - I love your poetry!!!
This was great! Amazing job!
One of Jupiter's sons. You meet him in Ember Rising.
Amazing! I love your poetry. And who is Whit?
Thanks! I'm not sure, I just do 🤨. Slant rhyme, unusual words, and a feeling for what your writing. Does that help?
Oooh, I love this!!! Amazing job!!! How can you write poetry so easy??? Share your tips! Lol