Here it is! I need a name BTW, so any ideas are appreciated
As 17-year-old Helmer Bakman walked down the streets of First Warren, the air was cold and crisp. He held his arms close to his chest to keep warm. He pushed a tuft of his dark grey fur out of his eye. He turned the corner and headed toward the market. He checked his pockets, he had 2 silver coins. That was enough for one loaf of bread. He sighed. He needed something that would last more than a week.
As he was heading to the bakery’s stall, he saw a group of people standing on the side of the walkway. He hurried into the crowd to see what the commotion was about.
“What’s happening here?” Helmer asked a doe to his left. She was beautiful, with platinum fur and a completely tan ear.
‘Haven’t you heard? The Packslayer is addressing the town!” She said, in a thick Cockney accent.
“I’ve met the Packslayer before. I’m a good friend of his,” Helmer said. He was lying again, he had been trying not to lie anymore, but to impress this beautiful doe, he could lie.
“You have! That’s ace*!” The girl said. “I’m Isle.”
“Helmer,” he said. The Packslayer came out a few minutes later, but Helmer didn’t pay attention, he was too focused on Isle, the perfect platinum doe.
*British slang for cool
A lying Helmer? How did he end up with that name? I really like Isle, and what a cool name you chose for her!!!
YES! You know about the Cockney accent! It's one of my favorites... This is awesomely written, @Mr. Blackstar!!! That is rather hilarious... Helmer misses out on seeing Packslayer because he wants to impress her lol. You ended it really well. Can't wait for the next chapter! (What does ace mean?)
Lying is horrible...but this is so good, minus he's lying...WE love it perfect!!!!!!!!!! You did amazing!!!!!!!
I feel like shrieking!!! Dont lie!! But so so good!!!
NOOOOOOOOOO
NO NO LYING! HELMER!!!!! AAAAAAARRRRRRGGGGHHHHH!!!
I can’t wait for next chapter! great job! It’s as amazing as I knew it would be!