Names are appreciated. Also, what chapter am I on?
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Joel nudged his friend Cassie, "That's Jo Shanks. The Jo Shanks!" He whispered to her.
"I know," she whispered back. Helmer didn't hear Jo come down the stairs, so he was still looking at Amber. 'Is that really her? The daughter of the late Lord Hewson?' Helmer heard footsteps on the stairs, his hand on the hilt of his dagger, he turned around. He saw the Leutinent of the War, Jo Shanks. A Fowler and a former Bracer, one of the best Archers in Natalia. Seeing Jo, Helmer relaxed and let go of his knife.
"Are these your friends, Isle?" Jo asked. Isle hesitated, but looked at Helmer.
"Helmer is. These are some of his friends, but I think that this is the start of a strong friendship," she said the last sentence stating at Joel the entire time.
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Not Sure Chapter 4 or 5....
Not Sure Chapter 4 or 5....
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Great chapter!!! But Helmer and Isle....We think Joel is fishy....