Guys, I'm so sososososososososososososososososososososososo sorry to have done this, but it was part of my plans from the beginning and my whole story would have been thrown off if I didn't do this. "Please don't hate me." -Keefe Scencen
aka best fictional character to ever have existed....
#ifeelreallybaddonthatemeRissybutIsocantwaitfornextchapter
IM SO SO SO SO SORRY RISSY/ @The Fowlers
note at bottom once you have read
Burr had disappeared and Fritz now stood where they had first found him. He was still half- frozen and he was sure his eyes were wider then they had ever been. He shook himself meantally, remembering he had to find Marisa. He decided to start at the inn, maybe she had gone back early. He rushed through the lobby, ignoring the chatter and burst up to her room. He knocked heavily on the door. No answer. He rushed back and passed Cottney without any sign of recognition. He burst into the lawn looking for her. He ran to the center and surveyed the lawn. He spun around at the sound of familiar laughter behind him. He turned and saw something that made him scowl. Marisa was arm and arm with a buck around their age. He had white fur and slightly pink eyes, albino. He was also one of the most muscular rabbits Fritz had ever seen, around what Cory had been. She laughed easily beside him, leaning her head back as he gazed at her with a smirk. She looked up and scanned the lawn. Her eyes met his and he was sure she could see the hurt behind them. She stopped laughing at once and separated herself from the buck, who looked offended. She tried smiling at Fritz but he continued to frown at the buck. She paused and seemed to say goodbye to the buck before running to meet Fritz. “Hey!” she said cheerfully, running up to him. “Who was that?”
“That was my friend, Richard.”
“Oh.”
“Why? What are you implying?”
“Nothing.” he grumbled, shoving his hand in his pockets. “Oh c’mon Fritz! Are you jealous?” she taunted, squeezing his cheeks with her hand. He pulled away. “Maybe I am.” Her eyes narrowed. “Well you shouldn’t be!” She pecked him lightly on the lips and he seemed to remember why he was trying to find her in the first place. “Marisa, we need to talk. In private.” he added. She blinked hard, shocked. “Oh, okay. I see how it is!”
“No, it's not about that albino freak,”
“Richard! And fine. I’ll meet you in your room in five minutes.” she turned on her heel and stormed to the inn. He waited until she was inside before rushing ahead to his room. He sat heavily in one of the chairs next to a small table. A light knock on his door told him Marisa had arrived. “Come in.” he called and the door opened silently. Marisa waked in, her face was solemn as if she expected the worst. “You needed to talk.” she said, as if she needed to remind him. “Yah. you may need to sit down to here this.” She did, but not without a scowl. He took a deep breath, so I went looking for you this morning, and I ran into these bucks…”
Fritz held his breath as he finished his story. Marisa’s eyes were wide with shock as his had been. “So.” he started, “You're in right? When can we leave, for Terrilain I mean.”
She snorted, bringing herself out of the trance. “Your kidding right?!?!” he shook his head. She stood with a concerned laugh. “You're seriously going to just follow this random buck to an imaginary place!”
“It’s not imaginary.”
“Yes it is!”
Fritz took in Marisa’s expression. She was scowling deeply and her eyes were narrowed.
“Come on Marisa.” He said, pleading with her now.
She shook her head in disbelief. “You can’t expect me to just leave the only safety I’m going to have for probably the rest of my life, leave without saying goodbye to my friends, because I trust you!?!?!”
“You should trust me!’ Fritz practically shouted, “Remember it's me and you, two peas in a pod! We’re meant to be! We- we love each other.”
Marisa’s face fell. Her emerald eyes filled with tears.
“But.” she took a shaky breath. “But what if we- what if we don’t.”
Fritz had heard the words, but they didn’t process in his mind. What had caused her to think that! He felt his face flush in anger, and angry tears filled his eyes.
“What do you mean?” he managed to croak, though he was on the verge of breaking down.
“Oh Fritz! Can’t you see!” Marisa said, tears streaming down her perfect face. “All we ever do is bicker! I’m not happy with you!”
“Well of course you aren’t” Fritz snapped, “You never liked me for me at all!”
“So suddenly this is my fault!”
“Maybe it is! All you ever do is scowl at me for not being able to do certain things!”
“Yah! Well you always shut me out!”
“That might be because I’m afraid you’ll judge me more for being weak!”
“I’M NOT SAYING YOUR WEAK!!!” she shrieked, getting to her feet, sending the chair crashing to the floor. “I'M SAYING YOU NEED TO PAY SOME ATTENTION TO ME!!!”
Fritz had had enough. Angry tears now streamed down his face to and he yelled back,
“WE HAVE ONLY KNOW EACH OTHER FOR A COUPLE WEEKS! HOW CAN I PAY ATTENTION TO YOU WITH ALL THAT'S GOING ON!!!”
Marisa started to sob, after composing herself a little she said, “Well then maybe we shouldn’t be together.”
“YAH!” Fritz started, before he realized what she was saying. His voice broke with frustrated tears. “Maybe we shouldn’t.”
They looked at eachother, both had tears streaming down their faces. “Marisa.” Fritz said, the same time Marisa said “Fritz.”
“You go first.” she said, as she moved closer to the table. He nodded.
“Marisa, we have to give this one more shot! If this is true love we can’t give up on it!”
Marisa looked at him solemnly. “I think we can give up.” Then she moved to the door. She opened it without saying anything. But right as the door was closing he heard,
“Goodbye Fritz.”
And he whispered back, “Goodbye.”
note: @The Fowlers I honestly didn’t see the compatibility between the two from the beginning and Marisa wasn’t happy... I’m not taking her out of the story completely! And Rissy, I’m sorry if you hate me now but keep in mind I did NOT kill either of them. @Mr. Blackstar @The Fowlers
YOU HAD BETTER NOT COPY ME FOR REVENGE BECAUSE I WILL STIP WRITING THIS FAN FIC ALL TOGETHER!!!
sorry again 🥺🥺🥺
KEEPER OF THE LOST CITIES
Okay!!! They finally realized how silly they were being! I really liked this chapter, even if it did hurt Fritz, it was good for him.
Awwww, NO! And yet... deep down, I do feel that there was too little compatibility between them... I HATE to admit it!!! Beautifully written.
okay @Mr. Blackstar.... Here we go.....
I'm probably one of the clumsiest person alive. My mom always says, "It takes great skill to trip over nothing, choke on air, and fall up stairs. Unfortunately you were given this skill..."
I love the colors ice blue and purple
Once I start to like something I get obsessive, no matter what it is.
I have a small accent, like not an accent, I just say words differently then others... does that make sense?
I have never been one to judge. No matter who the person is I try and find a good side.
(this might be one that won't seem right) I'm kind of a badie. I am good at cheating in games, don't judge me, and I'm willing to break unsaid rules, like I'm in general not supposed to but I was never told not to sort of thing.
I'm VERY stubborn
While I love video games and riding rip sticks and other "boyish" things I have a very girly side, like REALLY girly.
I'm a very percky, bubbly, fun person... at lease i've been told...
And the thing that bothers me the most. My eyes. they are so confusing!!!! People have said I have tons of different eye colors, they say green, blue, teal, grey, seafome green, cyan, ice blue, and many more. I just like to say their blue... They are like a really dark blue on the rim, then they turn into like a bright blue, and them they turn green, and then my pupil. I hate them because why can't I just have normal eyes that are one color!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
sorry I kinda ranted about my stupid eyes.... That was probably really annoying....
@Mr. Blackstar @The Fowlers
I did what must be done for the story to continue. I’m sorry, really, and I hope you guys will continue reading even though I destroyed your ship. Rissy, I’m sosososo sorry, but I promise we will see more Marisa in the future. @Mr. Blackstar
DONT YOU DARE!!!
This was a great chapter, except you broke them up....maybe they could get back together in the end....right? But still beautifully written!!!
YOU MONSTER!!! YOU DIDNT KILL THEM, YOU JUST KILLED THE LOVE THAT WAS THERE!!!
I WONT ACCEPT THIS TYRANNY!!! PETITION TO GET THEM BACK TOGETHER AND END @Jo4life 's EVIL REIGN OF TERROR ON THIS CUTE COUPLE!!!!
* quiet sobs* that hurt... but written so well 👏👏