Hey here's the next chapter...sorry about the chapter names lately, I just haven't know what to name them...lol.....
No one moved they all stood still looking around nervously. But the voice spoke again, this time louder. “I said, hands where I can see them buckies!”
Still no one moved. Then an arrow swished over Ky’s head, sticking in a tree. Ky looked back then said, “You missed!”
The rabbit chuckled, then said, “We never miss, I was aiming for the tree, now hands up or I will really shoot your head.”
Ky put his hands up slowly, the other bucks and the grey doe did the same. But David didn’t move his hands.
“Up lad, I don’t want to hurt anyone but I will if I have too,” The rabbit said, his voice stern.
“I can’t, my friend he’s hurt,” David said.
“Lay him down, he’ll be fine.” The rabbit said, his voice edgy and nervous.
Alan wanted to believe that he was going to be fine but the intense pain in his leg made him think otherwise. His leg hurt so bad that he felt sick it hurt more then anything he had ever felt in his life. David gently laid him down on his side, trying his best not to break or touch the arrow which was still in Alan’s leg. David the slowly put his hands up.
The rabbit came out from the darkness then, he was a tall intimidating buck, he held a bow with a nocked arrow and a sword at his side. “Good, very good,” the buck said, looking them over. Then he said, “Now, Rick, Shan, Bine, and Meeker check them.”
Four rabbits came into the clearing, three of the rabbits were tall and strong looking, but the fourth rabbit was short and scrawny. The four rabbits checked all of them for weapons but didn’t find anything but the small metal rod that Ky had used to open the gate. The rabbits went back to the tall rabbit that looked to be in-charge. The rabbit looked at David and asked, “Who are y’all?”
“We are orphans from First Warren,” David answered.
The rabbit nodded then said, “We camp here tonight, and tomorrow y’all are going with us, back to Harbone.”
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Wowwwww! Loved when he said, "We never miss. I was aiming for the tree." 😆 And, no pun intended, did I miss something? Is the rabbit Lord Hewson? This was really well written!