Hey guys, here it is....not sure how I feel about this but oh well...anyway the next chapter will be in my new fanfic Lost Longtreader, which is for Jaidie's B-day....
Hope you guys enjoy this okay chapter, feedback, please!
Rissy
Eileen felt the strong wind blowing through her clothes and fur as the bird soared with spectacular speed. It folded its large wings and dove, making the wind harsher and colder. Her whole body felt like it was frozen solid, she couldn’t feel anything, but the numbing pain inside. The bird landed roughly and let out a screech that seemed to echo through Eileen’s ears. She shook her head and straightened her back as she began to rub her frozen hands together to regain the feeling. She then jumped down from the raptor and almost tripped on her long dress, it was always getting in her way.
She heard Lancely’s bird give an ear-piercing shriek before it landed on the ground beside her. She looked up at Lancely.
“So what’s the plan?” She asked.
Lancely gave her a hard stare as he jumped down and landed perfectly. He then turned and grabbed the doe with molasses fur by the arm, he jerked her off the bird, and the doe let out a scream. Lancely then turned his head toward Eileen as he said, roughly, “I don’t know, ask her!”
Lancely then grabbed the doe again and turned her to face Eileen. Eileen stared into the doe’s eyes and saw a fire flickering in them. She almost smiled at the doe but she knew if she chose to side with the doe, she would have to act like she was still on Lancely’s side for now. Eileen was about to say something when Akrasia’s soft voice cut her off.
“Eileen, Lancely, there is dried blood over here and it seems to lead further into the forest. Perhaps towards a town.”
Eileen turned to where Akrasia knelt in front of the bloodstains that were all over the ground. Eileen’s stomach flipped with disgust, she hated the sight of blood, but yet she had to see it every day of her life. She heard Lancely say.
“Good work Akrasia. We will go to the town now and wherever they are staying we will destroy it.” Lancely let out a small laugh, it was a laugh Eileen didn’t like. She shivered.
Then the doe yelled, “No, no, please, don’t hurt them! Hurt me, not them! Please, they have done nothing, it’s me you want, not…”
“Quiet!” Lancely said, cutting the doe off.
Eileen looked at the doe. Tears ran freely down the doe’s face as she tried to hold them back. The doe’s feeling for her friends touched Eileen. She wanted to help her, to keep Lancely from killing the doe’s friends, but… Lancely was too good of a fighter for either her or Akrasia or even both of them to best. He was skilled with the sword and could take down both of them with one swipe of his blade if he wanted to.
But Eileen was curious about how they would destroy wherever these rabbits were located. “What are your plans for destroying wherever these rabbits are?”
Lancely smiled, a look of evil entering his green eyes. “I’m going to blast powder wherever they are staying.” The smile didn’t leave Lancely’s face as he spoke.
Eileen’s eyes widened, and she heard the doe yell out. “No!” As she tried to wiggle free from Lancely. But he tightened his grip on the doe’s arm.
Eileen didn’t know what she was going to do, her heart slowly sank to the bottom of the ocean of despair. It felt like she was frozen in time as confusion swirled in her mind like a great whirlpool coming to sweep her away. Only this was far worse because it was actually going to happen and rabbits, innocent rabbits, we’re going to die.
Ughhhhhh Lancely!!!!!!!! Amazing chapter, and descriptions! I find it so interesting and intriguing to read about Eileen and her struggles and her emotions - she seems calculating and perhaps cold outwardly, but deep down she has strong feelings. I'm so excited for the next chapter!!!! (And happy birthday, Jaidie!)
Ugh... I hate Lancely. I nearly liked him at first, but as I've seen more of him I don't think there's any hope for me ever liking him.
I am so, so much looking forward to the Lost Longtreader! It's such a cool name, and it sounds so fun.
i knew the house was gonna blow up!!! lol...
ugh... lancely... so evil..... he deserves something horrible.. ugh...
poor poor Eileen!!
Happy b-day Jaidie!!!
so excited for the lost longtreader!!!!!!!