I'm not entirely sure why I wrote this chapter the way I did, but anyways... bear with me! đ Any feedback is welcome! Again, thanks so much for the positive feedback and being so kind and friendly! You guys make me feel so welcome and I always look forward to sharing with you guys!
Blessings,
A. R.
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Smalls returned to First Warren just before dinner, and he couldnât stop smiling. It had been such a fun afternoon, working alongside his soon-to-be brother-in-law and his fiance. It gave him a fresh mind before returning to the stack of grim reports that awaited him. He sighed, shaking his head as he entered the palace. Rabbits headed this way and that, completing tasks before calling it a day.
    âYou look like youâve had a good day,â a voice said quietly. Smalls turned and saw Wilfred Longtreader. He was more than glad that the buck had pulled through the last battle. The tall grey rabbit smiled wide and offered a bow before stepping closer to the prince.
âHow are you, Wilfred? Have any new adventures to go on?â Smalls asked as they made their way to the council room. Wilfred smiled. âAn adventure of sorts. What about you?â Smalls grinned. âI was helping Picket and Weezie at the farmhouse. Itâs beautiful out there.â
    Wilfred nodded, acknowledging what he said, but remaining quiet. Thatâs odd, Smalls thought. They continued on in silence for a few minutes before Smalls ventured to break it. âWilfred, are you alright?â The buck looked up at him in a sort of daze. He answered a few seconds later. âNot âalright', but Iâm okay.â Smalls studied his expression. He looked sad and weary, but a flicker of hope glowed in his eyes. âSmalls, do you⌠do you remember that meeting I had with Helmer at Cloud Mountain?â
    Smalls head snapped upright. He remembered now! Wilfred had spoken with Helmer in regard to his family, and Helmer spoke⌠âIn regard to his family.â Smalls finished aloud, his voice low and strained. Wilfred nodded. âIâve found his sister and niece. Weezie is being taken care of by Picket, thatâs for certain. But Airen⌠Sheâs so quiet, and Iâm worriedâŚâ Wilfred stopped, refusing to go on. Smalls looked up at him, contemplating whether he should speak the question that came to mind.
    He went for it.
    âWilfred, are you frightened?â The grey buck looked up at him, an almost helpless look in his eyes. âFrightened? About speaking to and taking care of an old friends sister whose as tough as nails and like her brother? Yes, I guess I am.â But he stopped, scowling. âIâm acting like a coward.â The prince placed a hand on the bucks shoulder. âWilfred, youâre not a coward. Far from it! Who was the one who risked his life and reputation to care for an exiled prince?â
    Wilfred smiled, thinking back to that day long ago. âI have confidence that youâll find a way,â Smalls added, smiling at his mentor and friend. Wilfred bowed to the prince and saluted him. âYouâre a wise rabbit, Smalls. Should I ever need advice, Iâll come to you.â Smalls smiled.
âAnd youâll always get it, though it might not be the best advice at times.â Wilfred chuckled. âSo, you were with Picket today. How was that?â The prince smiled. âRefreshing. I have to return to all those reports, however.â Wilfred nodded slowly.
    âWilfred, where would Jacks be?â Smalls asked suddenly. The buck furrowed his brow, thinking. âHmm⌠Whittle and Sween were telling me that heâs been playing out by the Standing Stones.â Smalls nodded. Wilfred eyed him suspiciously. âIs something wrong?â He asked finally. Smalls shook his head, a smile slowly appearing. âNo, I just want to talk with him.â Wilfred smiled. âIâm sure he would enjoy that.â
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A Royal Proposal - Chapter 4
A Royal Proposal - Chapter 4
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Oohh I really like Wilfred and Airen. *hug
Also, this seems to be connected to a lot of other fanfics. I like that.
This is so awesome! Love that your doing this!!!! Can't wait till he proposes!!!!!!!!!!! Awe, your doing such a great job! How's your book you were going to publish coming?
So good! Canât wait for the next one!
Aww, great job! The dialogue is SO good. It's very balanced - not being on-the-nose but neither so that it's hard to follow. Great job!!!!
AWWWWW!!!!! I LOVE WIFRED SOSOSO MUCH!!!!
Ooh, I'm excited for the next chapter, can't wait to see what happens. Great job!
Have him propose to her in the garden. that's always the romantic spot
This is amazing! You have me on my toes. I can't wait for more!
You just made my day! I am so excited to read this!!!!