Hey-oh! Here it is! Sorry it's short, I've been busy with my Christmas fanfic and a Christmas surprise for you guys, so yeah, here it is😁
Merry Christmas!❤💚🦌⛄❄
Jaidie/Dragon girl
Jo groaned and his eyes flitted open. He was in a dark damp place, he shivered and wrapped his arms around his knees.
“Jo?”
Jo looked up.
“Niles!” Jo said, scrambling over to him.
Niles threw his arms around him.
“Are you okay?” Jo asked, pushing Niles away so he could see his face.
Niles nodded. “I’m fine.”
Jo sighed.
“Now what?” Niles asked, looking around the dark cell.
Jo shook his head. “I don’t know Niles, I really don’t know.”
“Hello Jo.”
A shiver ran down Jo’s spine. Fane.
Fane clicked his tongue. “Enjoying you’re stay?”
Jo looked up at Fane, but said nothing.
Fane chuckled. “What’s wrong Jo, scared?”
Jo bit his lip.
Fane laughed, then became serious. “What are you doing here anyway? Why are you in my palace?” Fane asked.
Jo looked at Niles, but remained silent.
Fane shook his head. “Well, can’t say I didn’t try and give you a chance to save yourselves. Because you see, I know why you’re here. I know that Hanna is just upstairs and I can go and kill her anytime I want. I was only giving you two a chance to confess, to live, but I guess your just stupid,” Fane said as he walked away.
***
“I think I have it,” William said.
Hanna nodded. “What is it?”
William pushed his glasses up. “It looks like a riddle,” he said, an edge of uncertainty to his voice.
“A riddle?” Hanna asked.
William nodded. “I think so.”
“Someone’s coming!” Maylie said.
William gulped and shut his eyes.
“We need to get out of here,” Hanna said.
William nodded. “I know a way out, come.”
Hanna grabbed the translated note and followed William to the back of the room.
William opened a secret doorway.
“Go,” William said.
“Thank you,” Hanna said, pulling a small bag of blue flowers from her pocket and handing it to William.
“Come on,” Hanna said, motioning for Maylie to follow before descending into the darkness.
Can I just hug Jo and Niles? 😣 Wow I loved how you wrote it so that the minute I read "Hello Jo" I knew a bad guy was there!!! So cool!!!! Grrr I hate Fane. I actually thought Hanna was quite nice at the end... :)) lol Yay!! Awesome job!!!
Ahhhhh!!! WHY IS FANE BAD!!!?!?!?!
Hey I have time to comment now lol. First of all, I love it! I hate Fane. Fane the Bane. I love William, he's so nervous that he's amazing. Niles and Jo are amazing cousins, I love Maylie (the name is amazing) but Hanna is still a brat. I guess she did just lose her parents though, so I guess she has an excuse
And I am trying to get my Christmas Fanfic done today.
Uh oh! Well, Fans, they're not stupid, they are just protecting there family!!! Awesome job and great writing!
I can't wait to read it, but I won't be able to comment, so I'll just tell you what I think in person, since we live in the same house🙃