So um, hope you guys like it... fingers crossed đ LOL
But I will tell you... be warned: #tearbank (or not?!)
Blessings,
A. R.
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    Dylan entered through the back door of the courtyard, scanning the space before heading towards the kitchen. Laurel usually works back here⊠where is she?
    He shook his head, reasoning that she would be inside. He crossed the threshold into Browns villa and stopped, his heart beginning to race and his adrenaline starting to rush.
    The servants were huddled around a pitiful looking doe who sat crying beside the table, her face in her hands. Laurel wasnât among them.
    âWhatâs going on here?â He asked, trying to sound like a captain, but he couldnât hide the fear in his voice.
    The head servant- Delta â looked up at the captain with wide eyes. âAsk Helen, sir. She hasnât been able to fully explain it to us.â
    Dylan then realized that Helen was the crying doe. He looked back at Delta who gave him a hopeful look, before approaching the emotional rabbit.
    He knelt in front of her, taking a deep breath. âHelen, I presume?â He asked gently.
    The doe looked up at him with red eyes and slowly nodded, her chin quivering.
    Dylan held her gaze, long enough for her to see that he was not going to hurt her. Long enough for her to see he was different, just like Laurel had seen and grown accustomed to.
    At the thought of Laurel his heart began to pound. He needed answers. Now!
    âHelen, what happened? Can you tell me where Laurel or Fern Evergreen is?â He asked quietly.
    Helenâs eyes filled with tears, and it took her a few seconds to compose herself enough to speak. Her voice was a hoarse whisper.
    âT-they took her.â
    Dylan looked up at her, a sharpness in his expression. âWhat? Who?â
    Helen stifled a sob. âV-Vitton's bucks⊠t-they arrested her a-and-" and she began to cry.
    Dylanâs breath came out in shallow, rapid gasps. No! Vitton! Arrested? Why?
    As the other servants tried to comfort the sobbing doe, Dylan stormed out of the house and into the courtyard. The sun was beginning to descend from the sky; how long ago had Laurel been arrested? What had Vit been doing to her since?
    Such a thought stirred his blood, and Dylan began to run towards Administration HQ. He prayed to the Maker that he wasnât too late and that Laurel was okay.
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    Dylan burst through the door and charged past all the rabbits who waited idly in the foyer and headed down the hallway. Once he reached the stairs descending to the cells, he barreled down them, nearly falling head over heels. He could hear the sounds from the hall above. It confirmed his fears.
    As he ran towards the gathered bucks at the end of the hall, Dylan heard crying and the sound of someone giving instruction, followed by muffled noises.
    Dylan shoved his way through the crowd and reached the threshold of the cell. He felt all the blood drain from his face.
    Vitton and a few other rabbits were in the cell, all holding some instrument that could inflict any sort of harm. Two other bucks were holding Fern back who struggled against her captors, despite the injuries that weakened her.
    And Laurel.
    Dylan could barely recognize her. Her limp form laid on the dirty, stone floor, her fur damp with blood. Her dress was stained dark red around her middle, and her arms were covered in bruises and cuts. She was unconscious. That didnât stop Marvin from continuing his mission. He had a rod in his hand, and he continually struck the unmoving doe.
    Dylanâs anger boiled and he took a step forward, reaching to draw his sword. But the gathered rabbits stopped him, pulling him back and holding him against his will.
    âVitton!â Dylan shouted, straining against the half dozen hands that gripped his arms.
    The rabbit smirked at Dylan, scratching his head a little before looking back at the horrendous spectacle.
    âVit, stop!â Dylan exclaimed, his heart beating so fast that he was sure everyone else could hear it.
    Fern was crying. âPlease! Leave her, sheâs unconscious. I-" Vitton cut her off with a strike across her face, stunning the doe.
    âVitton, I said stop!â Dylan pleaded, his eyes wide with undisguisable fear.
    Vitton glared at him. âYou do realize that youâre the reason sheâs here, right?â He asked.
    Dylan froze. What?
    Vitton smiled, a cold, thin, evil smile. âShe gets in the way of your work, we take her out of the way. Understand?â
    Dylan jerked his right arm loose. âThen why punish her? Punish me for my wrong!â He nearly cursed, his throat tightening with tears. He was losing time! If he didnât do something, Laurel could-
    A scream caught everyoneâs attention as Fern broke free from her captors and rushed at her daughter. But she didnât see Vit draw his sword.
    Dylan felt his heart stop. âNO!â
    Fern collapsed to the ground, gasping as she clutched at her wound. Vitton just smirked, studying his bloodied blade with mild amusement.
    Dylan came to the dying does side and grasped her hands, hardly daring to breath. This was his fault? Guilt overwhelmed him; he knew, somehow, that it was true.
    Fern tried to focus on Dylan, her eyes dimming and dilated. âT-take⊠c-care⊠of her,â she wheezed, coughing and spluttering. Dylan squeezed her hands in his, and he didnât know if he imagined the weak squeeze was returned or not. After a painful, dreadful few seconds, Fern Evergreen fell silent.
    Dylan bowed his head, trying to swallow back the tears that were determined to spring forth. Fern Evergreen was dead. He could have stopped this, could have saved her. Linden told him to watch out for his daughter; he might as well have said to care for both his family members. And now, Fern was gone. And LaurelâŠ
    He heard shuffling footsteps and looked up.
    The soldiers began to file out of the cell, one after the other. Vitton had motioned them away as he paced the cell, strangely quiet.
    âWell, captain. Isnât this delicious?â He purred, removing his gloves very slowly as he shook his head.
    Dylan turned and felt panic replace the sorrow in his chest. He knelt beside Laurel and could hardly comprehend all the injuries she had. There was so much blood. He knew that there was internal bleeding; if she didnât get help, she could die.
    Such a thought made him sick. Life without Laurel? Either here in Akolan, or out in the great wide world? No! That canât happen!
    Taking care to not injure her further, Dylan carefully lifted her into his arms. Once he was sure she was secure and safe in his arms, he staggered to his feet. She didnât make a sound, other than her breathing that seemed so frail in this place.
    Dylan looked back at Vitton, clenching his jaw. âI quit.â
    Vit raised an eyebrow, a hissing sort of laugh the only response for the moment.
    âYou quit? Walters, I donât know whatâs wrong with you or who messed up your brain; but this is the best place to be. Your position, captain, is the top of the chain here. You are very well on the top with Morbin himself! Donât you want that power?â
    Dylan couldnât believe what he was hearing. And from Vitton! Of all rabbits!
    He swallowed, looking up at the blood-thirsty buck. âIf having friends harmed and everyone being told to fear you is what this position offers, I want no part of it. Iâll take my place as a farmer, thank you.â And he turned out of the cell.
    âWALTERS!â Vitton barked. Dylan froze in his tracks.
    Vitton stepped out of the cell, his nose turned up as if some plague were near. âYou canât quit. You can have four days off but then youâre back on duty. Oh and,â he added, smiling coldly at him. âYou can take care of the body. Or bodies, I should say,â motioning to Laurelâs unconscious form in Dylanâs arms.
    Dylan turned and continued down the hall and up the stairs. The foyer was empty now, save a clerk who was finishing up paperwork. But he paid no attention to Dylan or the injured rabbit in his arms.
    Dylan exited Administration head quarters and took a breath, looking around. The sky was dark, and the streets were nearly empty. The sky above was pitch black, save the moon that shone coldly down on the streets of Akolan.
    Dylan looked down at Laurel, his heart trembling. She needed medical attention now! And he knew exactly where to find it.
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LAUREL!!!!! NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
Okay can we just say once again how sad and moving and just perfect this chapter was!!!!!!!!!!!! Everything was so well worded and just, ahhh.....perfect!!!! But perfect isn't even the right word! It's better than perfect!!! Whatever word that would be......
đ±đ±đ±đ±đ±đ± GAH!!!!!! How I HATE VITTON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Fern!!!!!! And JUST after her and Laurel made up!!!!!!!!!!!1 NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
I do love Dylan, though. And I love you!!!
BUT I HATE VITTON!!!!!!!!!!!!! Has he ever been tortured? PROBABLY NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!! But he SHOULD BE!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOO!!!!!!
At least Fern and Laurel made up :(
GO DYLAN WOOP WOOP
DIE VITTON WOOP WOOP
Trying not to cry.... Ok, I give up đđđđđđ
not too cry.
so sad... poor fern...
Oh. My. I was almost crying before I got past the first few sentences. This is absolutely... actually, I don't know how to describe what I'm feeling - pure admiration and love for Dylan, horror for Fern and such sorrow for Laurel... this was seriously an emotional roller coaster and you wrote it just amazingly!!! Thank you ever so much for having this in Dylan's POV!!!!!! It was... oh my just thinking back on how much it moved Dylan, like it was so satisfying to read how angry he got, if that makes any sense, because it just makes it all the more sure that he truly does care for Laurel - and Fern!!! Oh how tragic. And just when Laurel had found out that Fern had been on her side all along!!! You are a wonderful writer. Thank you for existing, lol.
ok. i'm not mad just so you know, just really, really, really sad. First Bastille from Alcatraz, now this...
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FERN NONONONONONO
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Dylan, she's been captured!!!!!!!!!!
dun dun dun!! what's happened?
Go Dylan!!!!!!!!!!!!! save her!!!!!!!!!!!
LAUREL!!! NONONO
oh brave Dylan.
it's so sweet he was willing to take her punishment.
FERN nonononononono
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HOW? HOW COULD YOU? JUST WHEN SHEWAS COMING AROUND....
DON'T KILL LAUREL!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
GOOD JOB DYLAN!!!!!!!!!!
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