meh. i don't know if i like this. it's the prolouge to a story called Vanadium 2: dragon rise...

and i started chapter 1 but writing lost it's flare for awhile.. anyways, heres the prolouge...

Echo sat on the cold, stone floor, with his back to the wall. He recalled with sadness his choices.

They were all wrong.

Echo was wrong. Had everyone been right?

Was it good that his deal had backfired?

He wanted to be free again. Truly free.

He recalled his life then, at the same time as hoping he would one day be free.

He remembered his treason.

Why did he have to break nearly 20 years of peace for money?

Echo slapped his head, tugging on his ears.

He hadn’t wanted to be a mercenary!

But how else would he pay back what he owed?

He hated the world as it was. Hated dragons, hated the fact he had never really been cared for.

The world needed to change.

And then Echo had an idea. What if he could still reverse what he had done?

What if, by helping innocent rabbits escape he could earn back what was lost? What if he could save the world?

Echo pinched his ear, recalling the hard truth. Truth he had known for near fifty years since he was born.

Nothing could reverse the lies. Wrong could never be right.

Echo would never see freedom again. And it was all his fault.

ECHO!!!!!!!!!

i came up with the idea on today's long, fun, three hour car ride!! [not sarcastic here, i'll have to post the photos...]

please, please, please tell me if this is any good!! i want to be an writer!!

oh and this isn't GE themed.. it be Vanadium...

i'm gonna go draw Echo..

-Fleck