i had some help from two of Bastille's siblings with Star and Flynn, they chose the names and characters, and it added too the fun of the story we were acting out, so i added them here! hope you like them!
[also sorry this chapter's so short.]
Midnight trailed behind Koda. What did her lizard want? She sprinted through the dark hallway, long cloak trailing after her.
"Where are we going Koda!!" She cried. Koda did not glance at Midnight, but ran on.
"Koda, I'm serious stop running!"
Flynn walked with his head down, weaving through the dense crowds and loud noises. His little sister, Star, walked next to him, holding his hand very tightly.
"Flynn I'm hungry." Star complained.
"I promise you, when we come to the right place we'll get something to eat."
"But I'm hungry now!"
"Ok! So am I!"
Flynn looked at Star and sighed. She deserved a better brother.
"Flynn your the best brother ever!!!!" Star exclaimed.
Fleck opened his eyes. His shoulder and foot ached. Why do I always hurt my shoulder? He wondered, wincing. He wanted to get out of here. Far away, where no one could find him.
A doe about his age poked her head out of the Hall, and a lizard as well. Fleck looked at them, wondering if he was hallucinating.
The doe stepped forward, and looked at him. She looked like a Blackstar.
She had jet black fur that looked almost like Helmer's with, a white diamond of fur on her forehead. She was about average height, with blue-grey eyes and dragon wings? Her uniform was dark blue and she wore a long cloak.
"I'm Midnight Blackstar.... Could I help you in any way?"
-Fleck Cove!!!
Ooo Midnight Blackstar!!!! She sounds so pretty. I also love Fleck - he's great!!! Lol I could kinda relate when he thought "Why do I always hurt my shoulder?" because that's happened to me before. Great work on this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
I love Fleck!!!