I have decided to write a story and I only have the first chapter but I hope you all like it.
(This story takes place after all the events in the Green Ember books)
Maisy is an ordinary rabbit who lives in Pinewood town. She has two younger sisters. Her freind Peter lives next door. Maisy is gentle, kind, and brave. Peter is adventurous, daring, and doesn't like to follow rules.
Ch. 1 Muffins
"Ahhhhh!" Screached Maisy as she remembered about her muffins. "My muffins" she shouted. Maisy darted to the kichen and quickly pulled her muffins out of the oven. "Phew there not burnt" sighed Maisy in relief. "I had been so obsorbed in my game with Peter that I forgot!" "The muffins are ready" shouted Maisy. Within 30 seconds Maisys younger sisters Lily and Emma were in the room. "Are they blueberry" asked Emma. "Well I dont care what type they are" exclaimed lily as she snached multiple muffins from the pan. "Just try one Emma" laughed Maisy. "Blackberry" Emma shouted in delight. "Yes they are blackberry" said Maisy happy to see her sister enjoying her muffins that much. "I should get back to Peter" said Maisy as she stuffed two muffins in her pocket. When Maisy got back to the living room, where her and Peter liked to play, she found Peter taping his foot impatiently. He had a frown on his face. Maisy rolled her eyes. "I brought you a muffin" she said to Peter as she tossed him one. "Thanks" he exclaimed as he took a bite of the muffin. Peter and Maisy continued there game of build it. Build it is a simple game in which one person stacks a block and the the next person puts a block on top of that and so on until the tower is so high that it falls. "Ahh" said Peter as the tower tumbeled at his feet after he put his block on. "Do you want to play again?" asked Maisy. "No thanks" said Peter. "If it wasn't so rainy we could go outside and play starseek."
I have a idea you could have them playing starseek and the star lands in the Grumpy Old Rabbit's yard and Peter goes to get it and Maisy doesn't know what to do. The Grumpy Old Rabbit is very mean to children so Maisy is scared. Then you can have a chain of events after that. Use your imagination!
Well done! I always love little stories about siblings! (Having three older siblings myself)
You can see the love Maisy has for them all.
I love it!!!! Maisy is so cool And Peter sounds hilarious, I can't wait to read more!!!