Names are appreciated. Also, what chapter am I on?
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Joel nudged his friend Cassie, "That's Jo Shanks. The Jo Shanks!" He whispered to her.
"I know," she whispered back. Helmer didn't hear Jo come down the stairs, so he was still looking at Amber. 'Is that really her? The daughter of the late Lord Hewson?' Helmer heard footsteps on the stairs, his hand on the hilt of his dagger, he turned around. He saw the Leutinent of the War, Jo Shanks. A Fowler and a former Bracer, one of the best Archers in Natalia. Seeing Jo, Helmer relaxed and let go of his knife.
"Are these your friends, Isle?" Jo asked. Isle hesitated, but looked at Helmer.
"Helmer is. These are some of his friends, but I think that this is the start of a strong friendship," she said the last sentence stating at Joel the entire time.
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Not Sure Chapter 4 or 5....
Not Sure Chapter 4 or 5....
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Great chapter!!! But Helmer and Isle....We think Joel is fishy....
Great job! What are you doing to us - I was hoping Isle would like Helmer! If Isle doesn't end up with Helmer... Idk what I'm going to do!! But I know I'll be mad. Although that is what a good author does - make what the readers and main character want to do or get be difficult. (I think this is chapter 5!)
Isle and Joel?????????? I thought Helmer!!!! Oh well. I'll have to get revenge *cackles mischievously
AMAZING JOB!!!! It’s beautifully written! I’m really loving these characters!
I can’t wait for next chapter!
Noooo!
wait, am I misunderstanding? your implying that Isle might have a crush on Joel... correct? Tell me if I’m wrong!