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Into the Hollow
Chapter 3
By Jo Longtreader
"Hello, brother," Garten said from the doorway. Whittle rubbed his eyes.
“Hello brother,” the grey buck in the doorway said. “Whittle, are you okay?”
“Wilfred!” Whittle exclaimed, excited to see that it was not Garten.
“Whittle, Garten is coming. I saw his armies coming this way and I came to warn you. Get Heather and Picket away from here. I am running North. You can come too if you would like,” Wilfred said.
“No, you go North, I will stay here. I will get Sween to take the children South, that way they can not find us.”
“I can take the children with me if you need.”
“No, you go, I will wait for Garten.”
“Have a weapon ready.”
“I will, goodbye brother.”
Wilfred walked away and started North away from the elm and the children.
“Sween! Take the children South. Garten is coming.”
Sween grabbed the children and started running South.
A Few Days Later
Whittle heard a knock at the door.
He walked over to the doorway and opened it. He had his sword ready to take on his brother.
“Hello brother. I am here to see your children.” Garten said from the doorway. “Men, raid the house.” The wolves ran into the house and drew their swords. Garten pushed past his brother and sat down. “It’s a nice home you have here,” he said. “It’s a shame I’ll have to burn it.”
Wilfred!!! yay!!
Garten.. :(((
Woah! Plot twist! Did not see that coming!😄 Great job, Jo!
Well, I can't read a lot of stuff too, Harry Potter, Wings of Fire, etc. KOTLC is clean though. No dark magic or anything. No swearing. People do sedate other people though, not sure about that. There are swords and stabbing, but nothing graphic, think Wingfeather Saga on the intensity chart. It has no Christian base, but nothing bad either. There are crushes and everything, but again, GE and Wingfeather has that too.
Also, what is KOTLC?
That’s great. The plot twist, the evacuation, Whittle staying to counter his brother. This is written really well!
Now get Garten!!! That was a serious plot twist...Well written!
VERY clever plot twist! And then he actually does show up! Man, the suspense...
Ahhhhhh!!!! Yikes, surprises surprises EVERYWHERE! Fantastic job!!
Speaking of KOTLC did you end up making a website for it? Cause if your not going to or don’t have time, then I could, (my dad loves that sort of thing and he would help me make it)
Ooo, I know who that is, it’s Charlie from good luck Charlie. Right? With teddy and Gabe? I used to LOVE that show!
Oh, I’m so glad Whittle didn’t punch him. It was Wilfred?!?!? Plot twist!!! Great job 😆