Ok, here’s my christmas fanfic! Enjoy!
A doe and a buck wandered on the beach with their baby as the day poured into evening, the cool breeze refreshing to the lungs. “And you’re sure of this?” The doe asked her husband, “yes, garten was here, and I heard a wolf growl and another voice. Somethings going on here.” He responded, almost with fear in his voice. “And you haven’t told anyone else?” She inquired, sounding frightened. “No, just you.” He replied, gentle and holding her hand. “It’s a good thing then, that you told no one else.” A voice deep and low said as a grey buck emerged from the trees. “Otherwise, I would have to kill more of you.” “Garten!” The buck said almost shouting, before wolves came swarming the helpless couple. The doe set down her child on the sand before the wolves gathered around them. “What do you want us to do with these spies, garten?” The one wolf said with one red eye, eyeing his soon-to-be prey. “No witnesses.” Garten answered, the wolves leapt forward in for the kill, ending the couple. A cruel smile formed on his face, seeing the lifeless bodies on the beach. “Clean this place up before someone else comes.” “What of the child?” The red eye wolf said rough. Garten looked pitiless at the sleeping baby doe laying on the beach, not moving to any sound, wrapped in her olive-green blanket. “Leave it here.” He answered as an eagle flew to his side, he climbed on it as the wolves took care of the bodies, and flew off to the mountains.
God bless,
J.J.B.
Wow, I'm late but my goodness, this was so captivating!! :) I need more lol!! Amazing job!!!!
Wow! girl, this was so intense! I love it so much! Great job!
Wow! That was awesomely intense! I loved it! But I need more! You can't just leave it like that! I need more!
Ack. This is so sad... Ack... Oh the title!! Is this a sequel to your other fanfic? Ahh this is so good!!!!
yeee I'm excited!!!!! And I love how you kept "on the Beach" in the title... Great job, and I can't wait to read it!
Eke! Can't wait to read it!